Mary Celeste Writing

Something that challenged me was having to go back and back to put tiny bits of information and detail but that was good because then I'll get very very smart. I have been learning  to put good detail and information into my writing. I am proud of my writing because I've put a very good picture in the readers head which makes my writing sound good.

Mary Celeste

Dear reader

I've Been Stuck on this island since I think 1872 to 1874 . With my friend Buckaroo. With only two palm trees full of coconuts and to get up the tree I need to climb up like a monkey. l can hear is the waves sloshing, splashing  and my friend sipping on coconut milk . I feel worried and scared I wish I could be at home with my family. My skin feels dry and wrinkled and all I can see is blue skies.

This is how I washed up on the island it was quite a scary story but, here I go

splash!!! Bang!!! was the sound of a storm smashing on our ship. I felt very worried I men very very  worried . The ship feels slippery and slimy. “Quick get inside crew before we slip of the boat.” Whoa we all fell of and so did a plank of smashed up jagged piece of wood of the ship but only me and buckaroo  made it on to it everyone else drowned.Two days  later we had floated to this island I’m on now.

I rolled up the letter found a old green looking bottle, just sitting there so I  

installed the letter into the bottle , then I placed it in the sea and , watched it bob away….. a month later I no because I counted the nights and days….. her nnnnn!!! was the sound of a huge boat heading towards me I’m saved.