WALT write instructions for the reader to follow
Success Criteria
Give an explanation about how the instructions will help you (introduction)
Write an equipment or ingredients list
Begin each instruction with a verb (an action word)
Use specific vocabulary
Order instructions so they are easy to follow
Ice cream
Do you like milk?. How do you like it a solid a gas or a liquid ?. You can turn milk into different flavors like skim and condensed milk .? I can tell you one way how I like it.
Equipment list
- Ice cream container
- Crunchy ice
- Small seal able plastic bag
- 30g of sugar
- ½ cup of milk
- 2 cups of salt
- Big seal able plastic bag
- ¼ Vanilla essence
- Extra plastic bag (if one breaks)
How to make Vanilla ice cream
Step 1: Place your ice into slowly into the big plastic bag.
Step 2: Pour your 2 cups of salt into your bag of ice and seal it then put in the fridge.
Step 3: Tip your ½ cup of milk in the small plastic bag.
Step 4: Pour your 30g of sugar in the small plastic bag.
Step 5: Dash your ¼ of vanilla essence into the small plastic bag.
Step 6: Take your big plastic bag out of the fridge carefully put your small one inside of the big one.
Step 7: Squeeze your big plastic bag into the ice cream container and shake it until you see ice crystals ice crystals look like this.
And wallah you're done grab a bowl and a spoon and let the ice cream eating commonsense
I wrote this for people that want to make there own ice cream.
Did you know:
Ice cream changes from a liquid to a solid
Do you want to make your own ice cream?
This ice cream is much better than the vanilla ice cream you bye(buy) from the supermarket so I sagest(suggest) you try it.
SLOGAN:
"TRY One know while you have the Chance."
I am proud of my writing because I have took on the feed back and challenged myself.
Something that challenged me was tackling the feed back and I keep trying until I finished and my writing was my personal best.
Next time I would put a little bit more detail so I don't have to keep on going back and reading my feedback.
By Balin
Did you know:
Ice cream changes from a liquid to a solid
Do you want to make your own ice cream?
This ice cream is much better than the vanilla ice cream you bye(buy) from the supermarket so I sagest(suggest) you try it.
SLOGAN:
"TRY One know while you have the Chance."
I am proud of my writing because I have took on the feed back and challenged myself.
Something that challenged me was tackling the feed back and I keep trying until I finished and my writing was my personal best.
Next time I would put a little bit more detail so I don't have to keep on going back and reading my feedback.
By Balin
